Writing poems off writing prompts

Writing poems off writing prompts

Prompt: 6.     Personify a color by writing a monologue, poem, or short story in its voice.

Dear colorer,

This is a suicide note. 

I have been thrown across classrooms,

chewed,

spit out,

stabbed repeatedly,

used on the tip,

and I can't stand it anymore.

I am also offended.

You think I am angry all the time!

I promise you,

I'm not.

Why do you use me

for all your angry faces?

Your firetrucks and fires

do annoy me so.

The worst of all

is the liquid 

that pours out of colorers like yourself.

I hate being used for that!

Liquid is for blue

not for me.

Why can't

you use me for things like

pretty shirts

or bright lipstick

smiley faces

lightbulbs above heads

curly hair and freckles

or maybe hearts?

Now mine is broken,

so this is goodbye.

Love,

Your Red Marker

P. S. I think blue might be having thoughts like mine too,

so don't be surprised if he goes too.

Between you and me, I think he's always been depressed.

(Timmy opened this letter right before his beloved red marker ran out of ink. 

R. I. P. Red,

and pray for blue...)

The House of Hades by Rick Riordan

Reading Response

The House of Hades by Rick Riordan

When I was in fourth grade, my friends showed me the book The Lightning Thief by Rick Riordan. I fell in love with the series, but now that I am older, I see the books with a whole different perspective. Rick Riordan has written many books, and I have read almost all of them. I have noticed that throughout all of the series, there seems to be one overall theme. The theme is that working together can solve all problems.

I see the theme in all of his books, especially in The Heroes of Olympus series.  There are many individual teams, like Anabeth and Percy. They have been together from the start, and now they are stuck in Tartarus together. They always support each other and they keep each other alive. Another team is Piper and Hazel, they are the only girls on the ship, the Argo II, and they keep each other company. Hazel and Frank are a strong couple because Frank has trusted Hazel to hold his life-span firewood. He trusts Hazel more then he trusts himself. Hazel and Nico are half-siblings and they bond over their father, Hades, and how hard it is to be a son of him. Jason and Piper are a nice couple, yet they need to learn to trust themselves before they can trust each other. They are still finding out things about each other, which makes it a little difficult to fully trust one another. All of these individual teams or partnerships seem fine on their own, but the goal through the reader’s eyes is to get them all to work together in unison.

In the first book of the series, The Lost Hero, Jason, Leo, and Piper were all together on a quest. They slowly learned to trust each other and depend on one another. Now that they are joined with Nico, Frank, and Hazel on the Argo II, they are having a bit of trouble working all together. But when they join together in private, it becomes a more comfortable environment. For example:

‘Oh…’ Leo grinned even wider. ‘You know, I like your version a lot better. Cause if Gaea falls to me, Mr. Fire, that is absolutely copacetic.’

‘Or to me… storm.’ Jason kissed her. ‘Piper, that’s brilliant! If you’re right, this is great news. We just have to figure out which of us destroys Gaea.’

‘Maybe.’ She [Piper] felt uneasy getting their hopes up.

This shows how when it is just Jason, Leo, and Piper, they get less tense and can talk about real issues involving their quest. But they have to learn how to bond with Nico, Frank, and Hazel all together, not just one-on-one. The team is always splitting up because they claim that too many people at once is bad, but they don’t realize that they will need to work together to get Percy and Anabeth out of Tartarus. If they spend more time fighting monsters as a team, they will learn each other’s strengths and weaknesses.

            All of the individual teams work fine individually, but they need to all join together if they are going to reach the Doors of Death and save Percy and Anabeth. If they don’t, when they are in battle they will forget the strengths of each person and lose focus. Their togetherness will decide the fate of their friends.

Nonfiction response on "Smoke Signals"

Response on Nonfiction Article:

“Smoke Signals”, by Alessandra Potenza, New York Times Upfront Magazine

In the past few years, electronic cigarettes have been becoming more and more popular. The article “Smoke Signals” discusses e-cigarettes and what causes and effects they have. Some ways e-cigarettes have become more popular is through advertisement strategies, flavoring, and appeal to young adults.

Many e-cigarettes have spent millions of dollars on advertisement, for example the author reports, “The blue Cigs brand, for example, hired actress Jenny McCarthy among other celebrities and spent $12.4 million on ads for the first quarter of 2013, up 1,150 percent from 2012…” This shows how e-cigarettes have been trying to gain popularity through commercials. This is a very solid way to catch consumers’ attention because thousands of people watch TV and go on the Internet.

E-cigarettes have also been gaining attention through teenagers and young adults. E-cigarettes can be legally sold to minors in multiple states and countries. Many consumers claim that they like to smoke something flavored, and e-cigarettes are using this strategy to acquire minors vote.

E-cigarettes are harmful because most brands contain nicotine and cancer-causing chemicals, they come in flavors, they can be sold to minors, and they can be smoked indoors. Most of these things are prohibited for regular cigarettes, so why should they be allowed for e-cigarettes? E-cigarettes should be treated like regular cigarettes because they do contain nicotine, which is very deadly, especially to underage children. Many people are afraid that e-cigarettes will make all strides towards pushing people away from cigarettes ineffective. For instance, the author interviewed the president of the Campaign for Tobacco-Free Kids, “‘The real threat… is whether, with this marketing, e-cigarette makers will undo 40 years of efforts to de-glamorize smoking.’” This proves how e-cigarettes can make smoking look desirable again, which is exactly the opposite of what should be happening.

The author uses both sides to prove her point. She interviewed with people who were for and against e-cigarettes. For the counterclaim, the author interviewed multiple doctors who are for e-cigarettes. They think that e-cigs can help smokers quit smoking. However, e-cigarettes contain nicotine, which is addicting, and is also found in cigarettes, so they are not much better then they may seem. The author wants the reader to recognize that e-cigs can be harmful, yet they are slightly better then regular cigarettes.

This article has changed my thinking. I used to think that e-cigarettes were much better then cigarettes because they don’t contain tobacco. I now understand that they contain a lot of dangerous chemicals, including a chemical found in anti-freeze, which can be just as harmful as a regular cigarette. Also, selling e-cigs to minors is very dangerous and will most likely become a bigger issue. E-cigarettes should be banned, or at least prevented from selling to minors.

Works Cited

Potenza, Alessandra. "Smoke Signals." The New York Times: Upfront n.d.: 1-2. Print.

REVISED Chains (#1) by Laurie Halse Anderson

Chains (the first half)

By Laurie Halse Anderson

Essay based off the question: What really hard things are happening in this text? Are these things happening in the world now? Where?

In my life today, I am always complaining about the “hardships” in my life: my homework, my little sister, my parents, and even walking to school in the rain. I always regret complaining about it later because I know my life could be much worse. In the book, Chains by Laurie Halse Anderson, the main character Isabel faces many actual hardships. She deals with being a slave, and everything that comes with that, during the time where the Revolutionary War is about to take place. These issues are also seen in the world today as well.

Isabel and her little sister, Ruth, are both slaves who had just been sold against their wills to two new masters who live in New York. Isabel is trying to find a way to bring Ruth and herself back to their rightful home in Rhode Island, so that they can live out their days in freedom. Isabel struggles to hold her tongue in front of her masters because she knows that it is her right to be free. For instance, when Isabel is upset that Madam Lockton I treating Ruth poorly, she thinks, “I took another breath, slower than the first, and tried not to think about the freshly sharpened knives on the kitchen steps” (Anderson 56). This shows that Isabel has to hide her true feelings about Madam Lockton. She has to worry about watching her tone and what she says around her masters. This is a hard task for her because she knows that it is her right to not be a slave anymore, so she does not deserve to be treated like one. This problem can be related into the world today. Everyday I see people losing their temper, whether it’s on the phone with their coworker, or in an argument with their friends. Learning not to start a fight by holding your tongue is a hard thing to do, and Isabel manages to do it.

During the time period of the book Chains, the Revolutionary War is becoming more of a realistic concept then just an idea. Isabel hopes to assist the rebels to earn her way out of New York and back to Rhode Island. Little does she know that she is helping the Revolutionary War start. For example, Isabel eavesdrops on her master’s conversations, and takes the information to her rebel friend. Isabel says:

I dashed towards him, keeping to the edge of the tavern candlelight. ‘I have news.’

            ‘Of Lockton?’ [Her rebel friend, Curzon, said]

‘And more.’ I quickly told him everything I had seen and heard… ‘Will this be enough to send us home?’

            This proves that Isabel will do anything she can to get herself out of New York. Isabel starts spreading news of war which effects more then just herself. This can be related to the world today because this situation reminds me of gossip. Gossip is a huge issue today, especially within schools and on online websites. Gossip usually starts from a rumor, and if that rumor is posted online it can be spread around the world.

            Isabel is a strong girl for being able to deal with all of her hardships like holding her tongue and delivering dangerous news to get herself out of New York. Even though I have not finished the book, I know that Isabel was very brave and would stop at nothing to get what she wants. My “hardships” don’t even compare to what Isabel had to do.

Chains by Laurie Halse Anderson (#2)

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Chains by Laurie Halse Anderson

Based on the question: How does this text address the points of view (perspectives) of other groups, especially those who usually don’t get to tell their side?

In arguments, especially with my parents, I find that I normally don’t get to tell my side of the story. In the book Chains by Laurie Halse Anderson, most of the characters don’t get to tell their side either. They often do things such as random beatings or errands without reason.

            The most important perspective of the book is Isabel’s perspective. Isabel represents the difficult part of the story because she is a slave and is forced to do all of the hard work. For example, when Madam Lockton (Isabel’s master) wants the rooms cleaned she asks Isabel to all of the work:

The work of the day was simple and heavy: strip the bed, haul down the linens for to wash, clean out the hearth, open the windows and wash them inside and out, take the rugs down and beat them in the yard, sweep and mop the floor, take the rugs back in, close the windows, and give all the wood a polish. (Anderson 267)

This shows how Isabel is forced to do all of the heavy lifting. Most people associate that house slaves are treated much nicer then farming slaves. This might be true on some levels, however Isabel proves that her master does not treat her kindly. Isabel is only 13 years old and is treated like she is an adult slave. She shows the challenging life of being a slave in 1776.

            Another important perspective is Madam Lockton’s. She does not get to tell her side of the story, but she makes the reader think that she is mean and does hurtful things. If she narrated the book then the reader might find out why she is always so rude to Isabel. Her character represents the most desired part of the story. Madam Lockton is filthy rich, which leads her to think that she can do or say whatever she wants. For example, Madam Lockton decided to sell Isabel’s five-year-old sister without telling Isabel. Becky, a fellow slave tells Isabel, “‘The sweet milk Madam made up? I figure it contained a sleep potion, knocked you out cold so they could spirit her away. I am dreadful, powerful sorry, but they sold her away from you’” (Anderson 133). This proves that Madam Lockton is an unkind person who thinks she can do what she wants because she is rich, in this book nobody argues with rich people, for fear that they will hurt them. Therefore Madam uses this power to control people, including Isabel.

            The last important perspective is Lady Seymour’s. She also does not get to tell her side of the story, but it is not as important for her to narrate the book. The reader can guess that she is a kind-hearted woman from Isabel’s point of view of her. Lady Seymour represents both the most desired part of the story, and also the kindest part of the story. She is an old, rich woman, who is very wise. While most people in the book are rude to Isabel, Lady Seymour is kind to her by not yelling at her and letting her sneak away to see the prisoners. The most important kind thing she did was let Isabel take some coins from her and use them to escape from Madam Lockton. She is one of the only characters that is nice to Isabel. For example, Lady Seymour bought a warm coat and skirt for Isabel even though Isabel could not pay for them. “…included a heavy skirt and thick woolen cloak for me in the order. I protested I could not pay for the clothes… ‘We’ll not discuss payment again,’ she said slowly.” This shows how Lady Seymour was more then kind to Isabel because she gave her a new coat and skirt for free, which helped Isabel stay warm in the cold winter months. Lady Seymour showed Isabel kindness until her dying day.

            Isabel, Madam Lockton, and Lady Seymour all are very important characters in Chains. Even though only Isabel got to narrate the story, all of the characters seemed to have told their side through their actions.